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Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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The Netherlands

0 posted 2003-01-22 07:48 AM



The snow is melting
dripping from the trees
making little holes
in the snow on the ground
The sky is steelgray
and it is cold... so cold...
a cold that matches
the loneliness in my heart
I make myself a cup of tea
with my hands around the cup
I try to get warm again
knowing... that the warmth
can't reach my heart...
I close my eyes...
to remember
the 3 months we've spend together
and I know
one day.... one day mijn lief....
we will be together again....

Copyright ©2003 Neeraja Wittebrood





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Nan
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
1 posted 2003-01-22 08:35 AM


You shall - Don't waiver in your resolve, and it shall be...
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-01-22 09:16 AM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Neeraja, this is so beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, this made me cry as I can sympathize with how hard it can be to bid au revoir when I will never even see my Joanna again and now she feels the opposite for me than how she used to! (wipes tears) I know that you and your sweetheart will meet again not long from now and you will be together, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-01-22 09:16 AM


Yes...you will be together again...hopefully forever.
I hope you banked those memories and when you
feel sad and lonely..take them out and remember...all the happy times you and he had in the past three months.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Elan
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since 2002-05-03
Posts 382
State of Wide Eye
4 posted 2003-01-22 09:19 AM



Yes, you will...

while he was with you,
I did not anticipate any poetry
from you...as it should be...
but now you will write your heart
and fill in the empty moments
until he returns to you...

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
Posts 812
The Netherlands
5 posted 2003-01-22 11:47 AM


Nan, Noah, Enchantress and Elan, thanks for the sweet words... it means a lot to me, it helps me through this time of separation.

A big hug for you all  

Neeraja


Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
6 posted 2003-01-22 02:13 PM



Stupid laws...big knuffel from this Dutchie and keep those memories alive gal...!

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2003-01-22 07:33 PM


Neeraja - may you be together once again...

BC

vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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USA
8 posted 2003-01-22 09:24 PM


enjoyed
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