Open Poetry #24 |
Lady of the Sea |
Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Lady of the Sea the great sea awaits and you my love asleep long has your slumber been so gently soon to re-awake together on the rising the wind to fill your sails the waves to fly us on my lady my lady of the sea together we shall go lovers of the dawn worshipers of the sun companions ever on My Lady My Lady of the Sea. James Parker Haley Jan 25, 2003 |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm there!!! Setting sail... Waft every crest upon your destined sea Embrace the Wave of Serendipity Lest its elusive arcane ecstasy Refurl with sail for all eternity Nancy Ness [This message has been edited by Nan (01-25-2003 09:52 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Lovers of the dawn... This was breathtaking, both your words and the picture are a compliment to each other. Sail on~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Parker - a very nice write, and the photo of the boat is surpreme... Where is it? BC |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Nan, come on this summer she'll be ready to sail. BluesSerenade, thank you very much. Bill, she's asleep in Toronto, you can see the CN Tower in the back ground of the pic. She's been out of the water for a number of years and I just took her over. I'm still trying to think of a name for her. I hear its bad karma to rename a boat. She's was formally known as Saturn. Somebody else told me since she does not have a name on her that that means its ok to change it. Well I kind like that. She's been sleeping waiting for me, a renewed life and name. Parker |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Pman...HOW COOL....you bought a boat.... thats so awesome...gorgeous pic...and she inspires lovely verse in you already. Pirate P-man...well blow me down ROFL Ok...you know the river runs right in front of the arch. good to see you posting again groovy guy. I was reborn on the shores of the Chesapeake Bay |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh James, this is lovely, sweet friend, arrrrrr, let's sail to them dry tortugas and lay anchor on paradise, me mateys! (giggles) She's a beauty, isn't she, I love this and the picture is grand, may you have many fine cruises ahead, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Parker...you could call her by the title of your poem, now couldn't you? What a beautiful poem and ship. Good to see you!! |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
this is a beauty.. not got any words to express how good it is (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! Beautiful! Makes me wanna go! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Take care of the more turbulent tides, m'friend...it looks so serene now...she'll be a good lady for you... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ah can I come too..... always a pleasure to read you Parker Charisma |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well done. ThisDiamond |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love this, Parker, the poem and the boat. I think "Saturn" is a very good name for her......... "Love makes the world go around" |
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jade dragoness Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 76 |
Perhaps call her Saturn's Song? She is a beauty, makes me want to set sail, to go beyond the horizon. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Janet, thank you i'm wondering how I get to that river from here. Theres lots of room down below too, hop onboard i'll show you. lol. Noah, thank you very very much. Martie, hmmm that's a good idea i'll have to put it on the list. Kellie, thank you so much for the reply. passing.... thank you always room for another. Sunshine, thank you but no tides on lake Ontario. One day she'll be on the ocean so I will. Charisma, thank you always a pleasure to be read. come aboard. Diamond, thank you very much. Well, thank you garysgirl I may just do that. jade, thats a nice suggestion, and welcome to passions. Parker |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you had to know I'd love this one too... oh, and fyi...those pics I promised...very soon |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ah, Park! Nice to FINALLY see a new poem out of you! And a grand lady she is! She needs an Irish name, though! Corinne peace is patriotic |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
SEA, thank you and I can't wait. Corinne, thank you. So what do you suggest? I'm taking all suggestions. Park |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'd name her Shantiniketan, though I may have that misspelled. It means house or abode of peace. She could be your passionate poetic peace palace. |
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