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Awake in love
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Awake in love |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Alive at my fingertips I’ve found masterpiece upon covered ground further back enough to reach round and grasp the picture perfect present. You fuel each shade of content that hangs outstanding of disbeleif. I whisper my thanks with open eyes to whom may be listening. I catch the clouds reflecting in windows to souls that are yet to be free. My every word bounces back with the light It means not to them, what it means to me. Beautiful beautiful ruptures engage me in your stare as these memories reach new meanings breathlessly, the sight of you is only mine. Night can never intrude My love Is fully awake. I feel that for love to be a life enriching experience, we should try and remain as awake as possible, not to believe that someone has no faults, and can do no wrong. this i have found only leads to heartache. we all make mistakes. living in the fantastic fairytale land of love is great, but often people forget to keep the reality, and their independance. so when u see me getting TOO mushy and dependant, hit me! learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write, nice ending note...I enjoyed reading this...love is a thing that I have had, and will have again I imagine...it's just different over time's passing... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Gemma, nice poem and great piece of advice to all who love. I think the last line is fabulous: "...Night can never intrude My love Is fully awake." Hugs, Marti Most of us go to our grave |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) I think I loved my Joanna too much too and understand this dilemma so much too! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I wish the best for you, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Good poem... I really enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Gemma~ I would never hit some one of the opposite sex mushy or not. LOL.Enjoyed the poem and your very wise words...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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