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Nirvana
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Nirvana I seek nirvana of my mind. Or a soft savanna of kind They all are one to my anon. For thereare none I pass and shun. I visit them a phantom spell. For in a fantasy they dwell. The roads to Eldora do reeks. With the spirits of all who seek Fragile is the footstep dare. Etched in stone and worn of wear. The rhyme of tick and time of wick Heroic is the symbols brick. But I will follow ebb and flow Until my arrow leaves the bow For when it does I’ll know the coup My arrows pass will through to true. I’ll wait upon my time and fate I know for sure there is a date. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
you always have such astoundinly well done rhyme. And just as here, you say so much! this is beautiful... And yes, in time, all will happen. Sometimes now is better though. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Fragile is the footstep dare. Etched in stone and worn of wear. The rhyme of tick and time of wick Heroic is the symbols brick. But I will follow ebb and flow Until my arrow leaves the bow For when it does I'll know the coup My arrows pass will through to true. ========================================== Fragile is the footstep dare. Etched in stone and worn of wear. The rhyme of tick and time of wick Heroic is the symbols brick. That verse..and its wisdom there in...is so poetically profound that it MUST be written in gold!!! Could one verse be any cooler??? Its insight like that, wrapped in your bows of rhymes divine that makes your poetry so special. Very cool write me Wise man Winkie     I was reborn on the shores of the Chesapeake Bay Virginia hasn't yet faded away I keep thinking tomorrow is coming today So I am endlessly waiting [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (01-21-2003 07:48 AM).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
This really incredible Sy.... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Seymour, this is lovely, sweet friend, this is so very true and I believe you will follow this Middle Way and seek the inner-peace you so righteously deserve! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, I find you to be the incredible one I just read your poem for Marsha. Noah, I can only thank you my friend. Alyssa, Thank you my dear. JM, You are all the gold I seek and you offer it so freely. WWRS |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is an amazing write Sy! Wonderful read with my morning tea! YOU poet sir are a pleasure to wake up to! ~Morning hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good morning, our dear Sy! Thank you for this bye and bye... left a bit of tear in eye... you shouldn't really let me cry...  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
again Sy...your wisdom is offered to us with a style uniquely your own...and as always..I enjoyed. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, And you are the pleasure of my labor. Sunshine, It is only a sun shower. Cpat Hair A pleasure to have you read me. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - oh, to be able to write like this, at anytime of day, nevermind so early in the morning!! I am in awe. hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Very sweet reply, thank you. |
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