Open Poetry #24 |
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Souls Shadow Junior Member
since 2003-01-17
Posts 29 |
Realistically I expected nothing funny..... that’s exactly what you gave leaving me only one choice and how strange is it that the comfort I thought was you turned out to be my own shadow..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hindsight is 20/20 indeed...good write |
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Souls Shadow Junior Member
since 2003-01-17
Posts 29 |
thank you |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
keep building on your own strength. very much liked the independance and realisation in this poem. exellent write! lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
ah, now to this I can relate... like it, like the pic K |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful! Very well done! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
Short but sharp. Like the twist at the end. Thanks. It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wonderful writing *s M |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This so often seems to be the case, doesn't it? Nice writing, by the way. Welcome to Passions. The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Nice |
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