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The Lonely Sea
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The Lonely Sea |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Fly to the ends I will hold you Safe in my arms Come to me I yearn for you To touch me deep Places hold magic They spread and course My heart is lost And the sea is the source Will it return Oh Deep Oh Whole So Blue Or will you keep my love All alone down with you I must know the future For I am lost in the past I beseech the lonely sea Return Her Return my love to me Take a good look at my face Well, don't my smile look out of place look a little closer its easy to trace The tracks of my tears [This message has been edited by Walter Poe (01-21-2003 12:27 PM).] |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
feels somewhat desperate, yet, very beautiful. But in the line "I must now the future" Is that supposed to be 'know'? loved this alot. Always, Alyssa  - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
What a beautiful poem... smile... once my nickname was Lonely Sea... until I found my artist... Neeraja |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
so beautiful, wrapped in poetic ache.... |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Walter Poe, Beautifully written, and spoken from the heart, enjoyed. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Walter, Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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