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Walter Poe
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0 posted 2003-01-21 05:44 AM


Fly to the ends
I will hold you
Safe in my arms

Come to me
I yearn for you
To touch me deep

Places hold magic
They spread and course
My  heart is lost
And the sea is the source
Will it return
Oh Deep
Oh Whole
So Blue
Or will you keep my love
All alone down with you
I must know the future
For I am lost in the past
I beseech the lonely sea
Return Her Return my love to me


Take a good look at my face
Well, don't my smile look out of  place
look a little closer its easy to trace
The tracks of my tears

[This message has been edited by Walter Poe (01-21-2003 12:27 PM).]

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GG
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1 posted 2003-01-21 07:31 AM


feels somewhat desperate, yet, very beautiful.

But in the line
"I must now the future"
Is that supposed to be 'know'?

loved this alot.
Always, Alyssa


- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Neeraja
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2 posted 2003-01-22 07:30 AM


What a beautiful poem... smile... once my nickname was Lonely Sea... until I found my artist...

Neeraja

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with you
3 posted 2003-01-22 01:40 PM


so beautiful, wrapped in poetic ache....
Cerenity
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4 posted 2003-01-23 10:20 AM


Hi Walter Poe,

Beautifully written, and spoken from the heart, enjoyed.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-01-23 10:26 AM


Walter,
Well done, enjoyed the read.

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