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Open Poetry #24

Im yours Forever

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-01-23 01:25 AM

In you I have found my destiny
My soul is at home within your heart

You have totally captivated my existence and enriched my being,
Overwhelmed me by the beauty I see when I look at you
Unconditionally you have opened your heart and let me inside to see the real you
Respecting what is so truly precious and rare, truly a gift to be treasured
Serenity and peace I have found within the comfort you provide

For you have set my spirit free with your kindness and support
Overwhelmed me by emotions from deep within at just the thought of you
Reassuring me without the need for words but from a single smile you give
Embracing what we have together and feeling the warmth grow within our hearts
Valuing every moment together waiting and longing for the next
Everything I am, is because of you and the person you have allowed me to be
Remember You and Me Babe NFAP– Its Destiny

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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1 posted 2003-01-23 03:08 AM

how neat! I love the way you did this acrostic! awesome piece!

Souls Shadow
Junior Member

since 2003-01-17

Posts 29

2 posted 2003-01-23 10:27 AM

you've made this acrostic flow perfectly

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