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Open Poetry #24

Part the Ocean

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

0 posted 2003-01-20 10:18 PM

Could You part the waters just once more
To help me get past ocean’s floor?

And could You wipe away my tears
To help me get past all my fears.

I’ve reached, and seeked, and fallen down;
I found your name upon the ground.

I stood back up and saw the view,
Lord, all creation honors You.

And when I’ve tripped You helped me up.
You’ve fixed my dripping, broken cup.

A plea, I know it may sound strange,
I’ll try to hope as an exchange.

But now I ask you, King of Kings
Part this water, or give me wings.

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

1 posted 2003-01-20 10:22 PM

the waters will eventually part
life will begin again..fresh start

well done

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2003-01-20 10:28 PM

Alyssa,

I absolutely love the last two lines.
Clever, you are. Enjoyed much.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2003-01-20 10:28 PM

Thank you, ecrivan, for reading and replying!
Maybe I should be praying for patience then, eh?
"Lord give me patience and give it NOW!"

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

[This message has been edited by GG (01-20-2003 10:29 PM).]

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

4 posted 2003-01-20 10:31 PM

Thank you Pat,
not sure if clever or desperate would be the words

But, I'm sure this'll pass soon, and I can get onto the valley instead..!
Hugs
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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