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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2003-01-18 01:21 PM

Maybe green like my eyes
flowers in a notebook--pressed time
stolen heart
born            to angels wings

soft lavender

light of   my   convictions

I sing not of what
love means

There are no windows—just 'panes',

I can see  leaves            falling,
demanding my attention
I will dream;
   walk gently
in tones of a lost lover

spilling the words:

Dante will mend
       stone palms
subtle as the whisperer
dreaming of escape

Ripples in distant waters move
in shadows of splash--   those, there,
tears on a page
lyrical still

A    blade of light   {pure} drawn in shades
    of    blue       roses mirror   eye  reflections

gold smears the shape

  sky will never fill
               midnights   veil

in your hands       lilies,

        light can not bend
photos of the ghost
before he died
taken by        crystal rain

I sing to life
To it's tragic beauty
To pain and strife
Let all that dances through me
The rise and the fall, I lived through it all

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-18-2003 06:47 PM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-01-18 01:23 PM

damn...I'm not sure what to say

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

2 posted 2003-01-18 01:24 PM

i like the format, makes the brain wander

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-01-18 01:31 PM

(smiles) Oh Lauren, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me cry to see the two colors coming together like two glass blowers kisses, making a piece of art the grandest church would accept for its bay window! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet firend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2003-01-18 01:51 PM

This is really very, very good.
I enjoyed the view and the colors and the sentiment.

Thanks, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2003-01-18 06:08 PM

Greeneyes - stunning write, as you do...

Perhaps green like your eyes is the kaleidoscope tree...

BC

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

6 posted 2003-01-18 06:30 PM

Lauren,
There you are...and in living color. Wonderful. Miss ya'.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-01-18 06:38 PM

Oh sweetie your words are so missed here.
This is exquisite..just as you are.
Please grace these blue pages with 'more' Lauren....soon.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2003-01-18 10:23 PM

Dante will mend
       stone palms
subtle as the whisperer
dreaming of escape

Ripples in distant waters move
in shadows of splash--   those, there,
tears on a page
lyrical still

A    blade of light   {pure} drawn in shades
    of    blue       roses mirror   eye  reflections

gold smears the shape

  sky will never fill
               midnights   veil

in your hands       lilies,

        light can not bend
photos of the ghost
before he died
taken by        crystal rain
==================================

I was reborn on the shores of the Chesapeake Bay
Virginia hasn't yet faded away
I keep thinking tomorrow is coming today
So I am endlessly waiting

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (01-18-2003 10:24 PM).]

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

9 posted 2003-01-19 04:45 PM

Lauren, beautifully written and very thought provoking.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2003-01-19 04:49 PM

Dante will mend
stone palms
subtle as the whisperer
dreaming of escape

Ripples in distant waters move
in shadows of splash-- those, there,
tears on a page
lyrical still
***********************************

So good to have you back,
so sorry for your heartache

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2003-01-19 08:25 PM

Lauren,
I'm enjoying
your Kaleidoscope tree...

and not for the first time...

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

12 posted 2003-01-20 09:47 AM

I have read such thoughts ...
the ache in past works,
no time ever seems right.

    I have gazed upon
       such lifefelt pane ...
          touched by the view
             clouded by your rain

                 lost in the mist of you.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

13 posted 2003-01-20 07:16 PM

enjoyed

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

14 posted 2003-01-20 11:12 PM

You always amaze me Lauren. I wish I had a quarter of the talent you have... you write so beautifully.

Tara

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