Open Poetry #24 |
The Dreams of a Dreamer |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Dreams of a Dreamer Night brings euphoric and mystical scenes Into dimensions of magical dreams Leaving your head spinning round in a trance And your heart tumbling into a somersault dance For the vision is real and the image enchants Awareness of truth in the dawn wanders back From behind eyes attached to a slumbering track Reality struggles to get a tight hold On a lullaby mind that takes time to unfold Its coverlet quilted with threads spun of gold Daylight uncovers the downy lace flake That sweeps over landscapes of meadow and lake What a wonderful sight for a daydreamer’s mind That can capture the grace in whatever it finds Leaving nothing of splendor and beauty behind It doesn’t quite matter perspective or view The only real value is what’s real to you My reality may seem a mystical haze To a mind that skips over the things that amaze But I am a dreamer, on snowy white days Elizabeth Santos |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Keep dreaming those lovely dreams, Elizabeth! They always give birth to such lovely poetry! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz--You dream beautiful! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love to dream all the time, in fact there is no place I'd rather be than there! (kiss on cheek) This is snow white in beautry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
"The only real value is what's real to you"....love that line.... Beautiful poem. Thank you... God bless, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You are not only a dreamer, Liz, but one who can put dreams in written form....and, for that, we are all the better. |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
beautifully written! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Dream or wile, you do it in style. Sy |
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