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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2003-01-20 07:54 PM

“BREATH OF YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
I loved you many years
ago but never knew you
existed until the day
came that we met...

I was sure it was you
in my dreams, for
when our lips touched
together my heart
skipped not one beat
but two, and the inside
of me was on fire with
the breath of you...
~~~~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2003-01-20 08:39 PM

when the dream touches down, then what? can it ever be as good as the dream was? is transcending the dream and making it real
worth it? whats this life for?

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2003-01-20 08:47 PM

Bill,

I like this a great deal. Meeting the dream of your imagination and the ~knowing~ it, when you meet. Like the concept....
very romantic, as usual.

Thanks, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2003-01-20 08:48 PM

BC you are a true romantic...reality always ends up being better than the dream, when faced with love

so enjoyed this

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-01-20 08:52 PM

Ooooh so romantic Bill!
You just know I love this.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

5 posted 2003-01-20 08:52 PM

This was a nice read. I really enjoyed it!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2003-01-20 10:42 PM

This is great! Enjoyed very much. TD

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

7 posted 2003-01-20 11:09 PM

I love this!!! You have no ideas how much I can relate to this. Once again your romantic words make me sigh.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-01-20 11:28 PM

(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Bill, this is lovely, sweet friend, I have loved my true love all my life, I just don't know her name yet! (sad sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

9 posted 2003-01-20 11:54 PM

There is deep love
when companions learn to breathe
the other's future breaths

~nodding at your velvet touch, Bill~
JkF

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

10 posted 2003-01-21 12:21 PM

bill bill bill, you never fail to come up with an origional, sigh worthy ,heart warming poem of love for us do you?
i admire you bill, and how each piece you write is far from the over used cliches of love.