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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
What romance Is there is eating alone Or walking strange streets Now matter how charming If no one shares the sights? I would not feel this If I could but navigate All the shallow depths Without finding shoals To hull myself My draft is to deep Keel designed for wave That I might not lean One sided too Or capsize When wind Blows Still I see charm Turned to commerce And try to chart new forgetting that too much of all I have ever done has been done just to go from harbor to next Do not think Do not draw Do not feel And I might be barged From this bend To next Kiss me I am alone |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 There...feel better?Excellent write Ron...much enjoyed. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
What romance Is there is eating alone Or walking strange streets Now matter how charming If no one shares the sights? ..... Still I see charm Turned to commerce And try to chart new forgetting that too much of all I have ever done has been done just to go from harbor to next Movement without destination, poetry without inspiration... I don't know, maybe it's just me.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
okay okay, now I am straining at the leash and howling at this gorgeous moon here. yer killin' me...sigh |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful Ron...as always |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Still I see charm turned to commerce... Aye, Cap'n... and there's the rub... when the magic turns green it's all lost... Another E for you, m'friend... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
loved the boatride, matey |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
loved reading this, cpat  hugs, kelly The greatest thing u'll ever learn |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It's amazing..you've written my life here. Your work always speaks to me but this one speaks of me.  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Perhaps you should allow yourself to be capsized once in a while, just let yourself fall in love. Cor |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Okay, here's some more to go with Nancy Lee's.......   |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggsssssssss) Love is the gravitational pull that keeps the boat upright indeed, dearest friend, to lean too far starboard side is never real love if its modest or unfaithful! (sigh) I send angel hugs out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Loved the analogies. Great poem. This character has a lot of confidence if just one kiss would do it.... and, I'll bet it would... Liked all the replies, but if you take them up you are already becoming a tad promiscuous..... How about a hug? Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I always THOUGHT you were a little dinghy! .....one that writes VERY well!  |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
ah ...kiss me.....I am alone....what words, they say so much......wonderful metaphors, wonderful write your travels have done well for your muse |
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