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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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If I could spot what omnipotence would dots might then rise from circle centers and if those curved form blossomed into spheres would I be afflicted with dimensional fears? what of the knot that lies all flat could be untied if lifted like that as higher dimensions view visceral insides peruse interior rooms,the cache they hide. would such beings have bags of skin would they hold organs passed onto kin and the powers that would arise imagination yearns to recognize. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-17-2003 11:11 AM).] |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
you talk like an english professor, your language carries baggage. and honestly, i can't really grasp the meaning but, you talk like an english professor and your language carries baggage. the good kind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
chris, it's just the way this wonderful poet is...deep and intellectual....sometimes above our heads...I often think of College Lit class and studying the great poets when I read Martin's work. A thing to be proud of! |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
Well I for one enjoyed it, note that I had to go grab the dictionary to wrap my mind around some of the context and concepts, but once I reread it I enjoyed it even more, fabulous man. Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I had to read through twice - My kind of poem, ecrivan... I particularly like the vision created in the first stanza... Nice write - Nice to see you posting..  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Chris, One does collect baggage in life, some carry it forward others leave theirs at railway stations looking for someone else to carry it..I rather like carrying my own baggage. By the way I am an English prof. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Passing Shadows, Now you're flattering me..the great poets??..I just try to be myself. Sometimes I am sad that sometimes the words I use are above the heads of some. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Enchanting vamp, thanks for sharing...using words you are not familiar with helps the reader to get a crisper meaning I find, and as you can those words are available to everybody. Nan, thanks for sharing..don't have as much time as I did but will post now and then. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice flow of words...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
don't be sad, it's quite a gift! and challenging, might I add |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Words I love they are my favourites tools and my best friends (sad I know) you use them well I love the language of physics especialy spacial descriptions hold such beautiful power. Much enjoyed Take a good look at my face |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hello Walter, the workings of the mind and how it sees space has interested me for some now. Thanks for sharing |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Passing Shadow, you're right on that I should be happy with the gift of insight and that's it. along with knowing comes the despair at being alone with ones thoughts..that has been the case before and is the same today. |
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