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In Fog
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In Fog |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
The fog surrounds me, Hides the pains and the pity, A cloud that won’t fly Holding a tear that won’t cry, I stand in twilight Poised between the day and night, No cares to which wins the fight. Gloom |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Well...well...I hope this is not your state of mind, and if so, heart hugs to you. You have captured pure depression in the shortest, most concise way I've seen written. Well done. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, A clasic gloom, enjoyed. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Last nights twilight was beautiful on the ride home from VA: The moon, so full in its coral tinted warmth begging eyes to wander its surface, to view it from every angle, as my thoughts were imprisoned in its glow. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
hey where've you been mr gloom? nice to see you. a pleasurable kind of dark you write, as always. lots of love, gemma xxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Okay, now you're gloomy, and in a fog too. hmmmmm, this will make it hard to find ya, you know.  I like it. It's done with your usual gloomy style.  |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, regards2you, T’is my state of mine, long hours on the road, events of dubious distinction and changing weather conditions. Pleased you liked these few words. Thank you, Seymour, Always a pleasure to see your kind response Thank you, Nakdthoughts, The moon was lovely for travel, I began a poem about it, yet to finish, Perhaps I’ll finish and post it later. I too was in Va., a wonderful poetic response. Thank you, gemjop, Off carrying an old friend to his final rest Found no way to avoid the conflict in physics “Can’t be two places at once” glad you liked. Thank you, Whiterose, Just a matter of knowing where to look, You look where I am and I’m always there, Glad you liked Gloom |
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