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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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0 posted 2003-01-20 11:29 AM



Is it Not Sweet?

yesterday
she stood on the veranda
of her dwelling
watching me
watching world
waiting

today
she is suspended
within her web

is it a web of deceit
where carcasses dangle
giving record
of her wrongs

or are they?
after all,
a bird’s gotta sing

doesn’t a spider
gotta eat?

if all is
as purposed,
then is it not
sweet?

©January 20, 2003

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2003 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2003-01-20 11:45 AM


Sometimes it's very hard to see the sweet in the purposed, especially when it comes to those creepy crawly thingies!

Great poem, Virginia

winston
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since 2002-12-19
Posts 204
NW of Eden
2 posted 2003-01-20 11:48 AM


Vas, deference to nature, this made me think. Thanks.

It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency.
--G. "DUBYA" BUSH. June 14, 2001. Unaware of rolling TV camera.

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