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Two Hearts |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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 Two hearts united With respect, passion, desire Love for each other Come from inside where Deepest emotions are kept Guarded carefully Love was hid away Thought to be never again Felt like as before It's not exactly The same as it was before Felt even stronger Between two of us This love is like no other Bringing happiness Like we've never had More joy, peace, and contentment Than in entire lives Two hearts united With respect, passion, desire Love for each other [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-20-2003 02:54 PM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a beautiful tribute to your love with your special one, nice to read things like this |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Gary is going to enjoy this one as much as I did Ethel! Wonderful write! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ *check your email*  ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Ethel, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, you are so deserving of this happiness and I wish you and Gary such smiles and comfort of love forever and ever, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michelle, thank you a lot. You're sweet.... . . Nancy Lee, Thank you. I'm glad that you like it. Gary will like it, I think...  (ck. your e-mail, too  ). . Noah, thank you so much. I appreciate your sweet words, friend. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 *This is so pretty it deserves another go round* |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Very beautiful, Ethel...heartfelt emotions wonderfully expressed...beautiful.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I forgot to tell you how much I love the picture too.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
A lovely tribute to your love A beautiful picture hugs, kelly The greatest thing u'll ever learn |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
THANK YOU Nancy Lee. That's the one. I love it....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Glad I could be of some help Ethel... You picked the perfect picture for this piece. This would make a lovely Valentine's Day post. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If this forum has been archived by V-day, Ethel, let's bring it back...if not, let's just bump it back to the top! Lovely! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is soooooo beautiful, Ethel! 'Twould make a lovely Valentine! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
It seems that you and Gary Are destined by the very Power of your words. Well written!! KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
Wonderful sentiments that make me overlook syntactical omissions. Thanks. It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Scorpio, Thank you very much for liking the poem and the picture, too. Thanks goes to Nancy Lee for helping me with the picture. . . . Kelly, I really glad that you liked it. Thank you very much. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Nancy Lee, I'm glad that you like it together. It does seem like It's for Valentine's Day, doesn't it? Again, I thank you for helping me.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
THANK YOU Karilea..... That makes me feel really good for you to say that...... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Denise, Thank you very much for your sweet reply. I'm really glad that you like it. . . . KJ, Thank you for reading my poem and for your nice reply. I appreciate it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Winston, Thank you for liking the sentiments. I don't know if you noticed, but each one of the stanzas was a senryu. I love those, even though, I'm certainly not a master at writing them. They're still fun to try to write, and I love to write poems about my Love, so I attempted to combine the two. . Thank you very much for reading and replying to me...... "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-20-2003 06:44 PM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Vandana... "Love makes the world go around" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ethel~ This is so beautiful and tender. I enjoyed this very much. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vicky, thank you very much for your sweet replies. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel, you and Gary may have two hearts, but you share the same beautiful soul! Warm hugs for the love you radiate to brighten our world... Linda |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello Linda  It's so good to see you here. I miss you so much with your beautiful poetry and your warm loving replies. We all love you here, sweet friend.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whew...we almost forGOT IT! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
LOL Karilea...me, too |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
I envy you for what you have, and for what i lost. Hold on to it and do anything to keep it. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Like we've never had More joy, peace, and contentment Than in entire lives Something we all crave in our lives. A warm piece. Enjoyed it so much. Thank you |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
sellout007, We will try our very best to keep what we have. I honestly believe we will succeed. Thank you..... . . . albert, thank you for reading my poem and for your sweet reply. I really do appreciate it.... . . .Ethel |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Ethel, i loved it and i am sure Gary will too always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Carol. What you doing up so late??HaHa!! "Love makes the world go around" |
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