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Open Poetry #24

To You

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-14 05:44 PM

To You

to you
I whisper
secrets
where breath
caresses skin

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."

sellout007
Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 108
Suburbs of Chicago, IL

1 posted 2003-02-14 05:53 PM

I enjoyed that! Nice and sweet.

In front of you
I listen, whispers
of your breath
tingle me within.

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

2 posted 2003-02-14 05:55 PM

Now I've got chill bumps...breathe some more whispers my way...

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

3 posted 2003-02-14 06:45 PM

Your poetry is beautifully sensual! Like breaths of passion...short little sighs.

Rf

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-02-14 07:40 PM

Simply beautiful.
Eric

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-02-15 02:55 AM

yes...beautiful!

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