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Open Poetry #24

Until Next We Meet

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

0 posted 2003-02-14 03:58 PM

A sun sheds a tear secretly over a foolish sky.
The summer dies angrily, leaving the brisk on an unhoped coma.
The sapling loses it's color and fades in it's annual custom,
Waiting for it's new birth to return.
The beast vacates slowly,
Blinding those who look upon him.
Exhibiting it's last smile as it's finale.
Goodbye sweet sheen.
Until next,
Shall we meet again.

IcyFlamez89
Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 292
Jersey City NJ

1 posted 2003-02-14 04:53 PM

It very deep, and just great. I'm kinda new here so I don't anyone, but I do know that is one great poem.

Emotions and Philosophy, my source of Inspiration

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

2 posted 2003-02-14 05:45 PM

Thank you Icy and WELCOME!!!!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-02-15 03:13 AM

bittersweet, yes

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