Open Poetry #24 |
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Pray for Rain |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia ![]() |
*Folks even as I post this, the pall of smoke fills our skies turning daylight into dusk and filling the air with smoke and ash. The chickens have gone back to roost so dark is it. "If my people who are called by my name, will humble themselves and pray and seek my face, Then will I hear from heaven and heal their lands." The sky is grey though not with rain The smoke pall hovers ever near And covers all this land of grain Men look up and women fear Fire has come to curse the land A land made sere without the rain While fire-fighters take a stand Devastation still comes again I smell the smoke and feel the fear While all, make plans to flee this pain The threat of fire is drawing near In a land not touched by rain The gloom of dusk surrounds this place The blood red sun will shine in vain We hide our eyes - cover the face For fire has come to us again With trepid hearts we watch and wait The see the smoke palls rise again With neighbours we commiserate Can do naught else but share their pain And worst of all is no-one knows Which way the fire will move and claim our lives and homes, while river flows are clogged because there is no rain And we here in this land of dust Beg your prayers, to rise again We stay and fight because we must Please pray for rain, please pray for rain. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kethry--I wrote almost this same poem in October when the same thing happened here in Southern California. Still now when the wind blows, the ash fills the sky. I pray you get rain...I have read about the terrible fires. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
beautifully and desperately written, I can feel it. I do believe God can heal the lands and with prayers hold the faith that He will. I'm certainly praying NOW. Hang on. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Lynne Your words chilled me to the bone and as I type I can smell the smoke from the bushfires coming through my window. I also looked on in horror at the devastation in Canberra, as well as the other bushfires in Victoria and New South Wales. When will all this devastation and tragedy end? I hope all is well with you. Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Lynne, You have my prayers and so do the people of Canberra and all that are affected by this. Having it happen here in NSW and practically in my own back yard; I understand their fears. The sun was blood red here too yesterday. I pray for rain. hugs my dear hugs A well written poem. Maree ![]() |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Hi Keth. My heart is with you, and si is my soul, and how wonderful it is to be right next to you on pips1!!! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
so heartfelt this plea; my thoughts and hopes are with you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I will keep our friends there, in my prayers, here...for I have seen the fires, and have prayed for rain. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, A wonderful write and you have my prayers. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssssss) Oh Kethry, I send you, Mauree, Sue, and everyone down under my prayers to the rain dancers in hope the rain can fall and fend the fires off! (sad sigh) Our thoughts are with you, sweet friend, God Bless You and everyone down under, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh dear Keth, I hope you are well and all those in your neighbourhood. I didn't know, haven't seen the news for days, must be awful frightening. I'm not religious but I pray for you anyway. Take care ![]() Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth beloved one, I know you were okay a hour or so ago and if anything happens you’ll let me know. This is a brilliantly written poem beloved one, and of course I’m praying for rain for you. as I said if it comes near you call me I have a bucket ready and I’m not afraid to use it. Take care beloved one you know I worry, As I said to Krissy that proves it don’t you think? of course it does. She'll have to stand in line. You know I love this utterly, utterly utterly rolling: ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm praying, I'm praying! Hard! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Yes prayers and thoughts , I was watching the devastation on the news tonight ,we have also been issued with fire warnings , the temps are going to be between 38 and 40 celcius over the centuary mark the next few days here Hope |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kethry, My heart and prayers go out to you and your countrymen....Here in Northern CA., our fire season brings this same worry and smell and color of the sun...always being ready to move, fast! Ever wondering will it reach town....all late spring, summer and early fall. The unpredictable winds ever changing as you mentioned. May we all pray for rain and safety for all of you. God bless, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
oh Kethry..this is so devastating! I will for certain pray for rain for you and your fellow contrymen. ~Hugs & Prayers, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Kethry, there have been some very bad fires here in Florida and my nephew has had to go try help put them out. (He works with Florida State Forestry). The fear as well as the smoke is awful. It has taken weeks before. I am praying for all of you.... ~Ethel~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I sincerely hope that rain comes your way...the news tells of the fires in Australia. Be safe, hugss M |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This literally gave me chills... you've written the desperation brilliantly. I know I'm late... but I hope you know you're ALWAYS in my prayers, dear friend. *S* Stay safe... |
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