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The Laugh |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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the nature of the laugh that when cut in half of the sound you digest..and rarely beguiles? no doubt a clever quest, not as sublte as sister smile. so tape recordings show how women radiate inner glow and alter the pattern of their laugh attract the man to carry their staff. there is no intent to suggest what laughter really is the nature behind the quest has long been a quiz. more evidence pours in... recordings show male counterparts obtain a louder row with laughter more sustained at higher pitch minor giggles exhibit another hitch that men laugh just the same among themselves as they do with their female consorts might get you to object and offer retort that he gaffaws just as loud, with male friends may point to a placated rivalry, to make amends. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-18-2003 06:42 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
*Female enigmatic smile here. You figure out what it means. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I love a good laugh... and a good laugher... it makes the world round! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Keth, so enigmatic it shines brighter than Jupiter tonight..hehe  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Karilea, all the better for this wonderous tool of disarmament  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Laughing AND smiling at this one.  I remember being deceived by a good laugh. He wasn't trying to deceive; I simple misinterpreted, thereby deceiving myself. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ecrivan Sometimes the tool of a fool, enjoyed. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
The world needs more laughter...much enjoyed your poem.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hello Midnite, well now he could have been reticent to tell you what was really on his mind and so out came some laughter..I find that now and again with both male and female friends and the tonality of this laugh is not as sustained as a spontaneous one. Sy, the tool of a fool, very true.. often enough I find a fake laugh goes hand in hand with ceratin moves that gives it away. Scorpio, if its genuine yes... if not, rather not hear about it  |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
it is a siren call for a heart smile and when heard by drop-by ears is one which they wish knew the origin of and long to become a part of. Ecrivan, amusingly astute, yet unchildishly full of gaeity, you did so well of writing of the inner meanings of laughter. JkF [This message has been edited by ShadowRider (01-19-2003 11:11 AM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hello JkF, Been a while since I've heard from you, appreciate your addition..all the best |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Nothing like a good honest to goodness laugh! Enjoyed the read. ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
and now you have something on a smile |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yeah, ecrivan, there is a difference between a laugh and a laugh, isn't there? Now, I love it when people really laugh and don't just put on, for whatever reason. But, I hate for people to be pretentious about anything. Vaery thought-provoking poem. I enjoyed it.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
much agreed idem for the steely smile used to fill in for words...I can pick that up oh so well |
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