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0 posted 2003-01-17 03:30 PM



Born Mystery

the wind whispered a haunting name
and he wrestled privately with his
need versus found desire ~ no game
                seek the fair, seek the fair

the sun shone longingly on her face
with all things going for her ~ she tried
but she wondered why she cried
                he is there, he is there

both at the end of their odds
oddly enough they were convinced
this was all there would be
                God does not play games that you can see

to not ever look (but find)
to not ever seek (but see)
both unwinding in versatility
                 there is a way, there is a way

she wasn’t looking
he wasn’t looking
both were choking
                 hear the wind, see the sun

when then the tornado came
she heard him on the wind
he saw her in the sun
                 each of you shall find the one

and a mystery was born

01.17.01
slight revised
01.17.03


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1 posted 2003-01-17 03:40 PM


"she wasn’t looking
he wasn’t looking
both were choking
                 hear the wind, see the sun

when then the tornado came
she heard him on the wind
he saw her in the sun
                 each of you shall find the one

and a mystery was born"

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Ohmygosh!!  These lines gave me goosebumps!
How do you do this??  Wonderful Karilea..
Ooooh I just love this!  So...I'm keeping it.
~Hugs, Smiles & Luv, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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2 posted 2003-01-17 04:07 PM


Karilea - if my sister gets to keep it...then so do I !!   Wonderful...just wonderful. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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3 posted 2003-01-18 05:05 AM


definate goosebumps!
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4 posted 2003-01-18 08:50 AM


loved this sweet lady...
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5 posted 2003-01-18 09:06 AM


Karilea,
This is one you wrote just for me, isn't it??
So, I think I should put it here....
                
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Thank you, dear lady.

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6 posted 2003-01-19 10:43 PM


Love your romantic poetry!

Shenachie

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