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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-18 03:02 PM


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tonight
I made
a wish
but all
the diamonds
in the sky
can not
bring you
back
to me

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
GG
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Lost in thought
1 posted 2003-01-18 03:16 PM


painfully beautiful

Hope you can stay at ease with it all though.. :-/

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-01-18 03:19 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Helen, this is so very true, sweet friend, I made a wish and it didn't come true so now I am just making an entire new one as I have no second option! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2003-01-18 08:01 PM


short...and picking the essence of

love the concise...and love the real...

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
4 posted 2003-01-18 09:39 PM


as brilliant as the stars and just as difficult to attain. Wonderful work.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-01-19 04:59 AM


You get me, good, where it hurts.
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