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Open Poetry #24
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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
0 posted 2003-01-18 03:30 PM

Layered

I am
a simple mess
complication
of a pearl
a tiny grain
of sand
layered by
the world

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."
© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2003-01-18 03:36 PM

loved this'n. (I can really relate to the simple mess part too--groan)
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2003-01-18 03:44 PM

knew you would...wink...helen
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-01-19 05:01 AM

wow...what a picture!
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