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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

0 posted 2003-01-18 06:30 AM

Then, in a room full of people,
my eyes meet yours, one moment long
And I feel this electric shiver,
this true feeling can't be wrong

Sometimes a kiss means just a kiss
But still it warms me to the bone
And in that moment of solidarity
I know that I am not alone

A hand is sliding down my back
In split moment of desire's lust
I don't retreat, because it's honest
I feel at ease in complete trust

I meet tenderness from someone
of whom I expected it the least
And that moment of expression
I wish it stayed and never be ceased

And I think Ahhh such precious gestures
Give me a kick in my self esteem
At those moments I feel prized highly
Like in good memories in a dream

~~~~~~~~~~

Then, in a room full of people
My eyes meet yours, one moment long
And I feel this electric shiver
of uneasiness, your look feels wrong

Sometimes a kiss seems just a kiss
But it chills me to the bone
And in that moment of agression
I know I'm standing quite alone

A hand is sliding down my back
In split moment of desire's lust
I retreat, because it's not honest
I feel uneasy in this broken trust

I meet tenderness from someone
of whom I expected it the least
But that moment of expression
Shows just power, I want it ceased

And I think Ahhh those awful gestures
Make me feel low in my self esteem
At those moments I'm held in contempt
Like in bad nightmare's in a dream

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (01-18-2003 11:58 AM).]

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2003-01-18 06:48 AM

You're so right, Titia - The trick is figuring out which is right and which is wrong - Could take a lifetime...

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-01-18 06:49 AM

Titia! Wow...a ying/yang moment of good/evil. You performed this well, with such a slight variance of lines...and stood the black and white of the moment side by side for scrutiny.

Well done!

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2003-01-18 02:05 PM

This is an excellent expression, Titia! Very well done!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-01-18 03:16 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Titia, this is so very true, sweet friend, this made me cry as I know this feeling ever so much, how Joanna used to love me and now she says she never wants to talk to me again and she lies telling me she never loved me! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to all deceived this way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

5 posted 2003-01-18 10:45 PM

my mind is all tangled good write

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-01-19 04:38 AM

both sides, good write!

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