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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-01-16 11:45 PM


Hold Me Tight

If I were the man in the moon
I would fly you to me in a
hot air balloon.

In desire of your feminine charms
I would ride moonbeams into
your silky arms.

Alas, I don't
   live on the moon
and I have no
   gift of flight.

But, if I could find
my way into your
arms tonight
would you
kiss me
and hold
me tight?

JamesLee
January14
2003


© Copyright 2003 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-01-17 12:18 PM


Ah, this is pretty, James....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

christian
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2 posted 2003-01-17 12:20 PM



uh oh.

:grabs 'mr. romantic of the year' trophy
from bill charles.

looks like we've got a fight here folks,
:smirk:

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-01-17 04:24 AM


...I would I would! Yes! I would!
enchantingvamp
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4 posted 2003-01-17 04:27 AM


awwww so pretty, enjoyed this very much!

Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell

BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2003-01-18 12:09 PM


This is a pretty picture that you've painted with desire.

Nice writing James~

vlraynes
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6 posted 2003-01-19 01:15 AM



JamesMichael~
Lovely thoughts here...nicely done.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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with you
7 posted 2003-01-19 02:55 AM


This is the kind of writing I think I like best from you. It's so darn sweet...makes a girl *sigh*
Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2003-01-19 04:25 AM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh James, this is so very sensitve and gorgeous, sweet friend, I know just how you feel as I long so much to hug my love! (sad sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-19-2003 04:25 AM).]

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