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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise 
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Off Season two bathing seagulls in sunny tint ocean spray Waikiki winter sparse winter beaches coppertone flesh still sizzles on a sun burnt breeze silver moon swept tide rolling heavy wave ripple crab body surfing rolling giant waves awakened to the challenge daredevil surfers warm days and cold nights lady bug curls for a nap sleeping plumeria clouds carrying on delivering their luggage at empty airport Poetry is: Passion, imagination and intellect running together. Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa [This message has been edited by CSKpoet (01-17-2003 02:58 PM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Reflective, nice. I like this line: "coppertone flesh still sizzles on a sun burnt breeze" Enjoyed, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (01-17-2003 03:14 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Spectacular images! Just wonderful. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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kram Junior Member
since 2003-01-17
Posts 20texas |
a series of Haiku - very nice |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang! this is good! love every word! imagery is awesome! |
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