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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-01-17 06:53 AM


Our Haven By The Sea

That special place
Only you and I know
Where sunset descends
While we bask in the glow

Peaceful serenity
At the end of the day
Strolling  hand in hand  
Neath the gold of the bay

Colourful changes
Across a ruby red sky
Where the night unveils
A sunsets final goodbye

Enchanting moments
Waves lapping ashore
Our haven by the sea
We treasure forevermore

Passionate intimacy
Lovers sweet embrace
Golden isle of paradise
Became our special place

Hope©2003
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enchantingvamp
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1 posted 2003-01-17 07:17 AM

This was absolutly adorable, I've noticed you write about the sea a lot, and I love each and everyone, having never seen the sea myself, you take me there with you, thank you.

Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell
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2 posted 2003-01-17 07:29 AM

just a beautiful beach dream right now, wish it were summer again
HopeS
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3 posted 2003-01-17 07:50 AM

Thank you enchantingvamp , I do live only a few minutes drive from the ocean and love watching the sunset sink over the sea , it so often inspires me
Hope
HopeS
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4 posted 2003-01-17 07:52 AM

Thank you for your reply inkedgoddess , I do live near the beach and it is summer here in Australia so it helps
Hope
Nan
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5 posted 2003-01-17 08:55 AM

Ah - but you've just shared this special place with all of us... I think we'll all be there for the next sunset too...
HopeS
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6 posted 2003-01-17 08:58 AM

Thanks for your kind reply Nan and yes you are quite welcome
Hope
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-01-17 10:55 AM

HopeS
A lovely change of pace, enjoyed.
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8 posted 2003-01-17 10:59 AM

Hope, I love the beach, the sunsets, my Love....so, I think this one's a keeper, don't you???  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  
regards2you
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9 posted 2003-01-17 10:59 AM



Hope,

This is wonderfully romantic. Well written and descriptive. I enjoy this a great deal. Talented, you are!


Hugs and warm regards, Pat

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10 posted 2003-01-18 05:10 AM

romantic, if I do say so myself
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