Open Poetry #24 |
Rude Awakening |
WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
~*Rude Awakening*~ Sound asleep in a dream. The sun not up. Moon still shines, but fades slowly. Children stirring animals stretching Sound alseep in a dream. Clock strikes the alarm. Wham! Everyone is up. Frantic day now begins. Yet, the sun is still sleeping. Dark as it was before, and people are leaving to start their days work. To early to shine To early to be human. That rude awakening has a pattern. Five days a week Same time, same place. That alarm sounds, the fight begins. To wake up from that dreamy place. Still, one is sound alseep in a dream. *Mistakes are made, you pay for them, then you do it again.* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big huggsssssssss) Oh Kirah, I have this exact same feeling, as much as I love reading and learning the joys of the world through dance and music and art, I too just want to stay in bed a little longer and feel comfortable in my dreams! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kirah, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Alarm clocks really are rude, aren't they? They should be banished... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
WindSong - and every day the same, b'rrrrrring, with the alarm. But to break out of the sameness, now that's something... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think about this a great deal...time for a change, I think! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is a nice reminder of what it used to be like when still raising children. Tanks you, you captured the moments perfectly. Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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