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Open Poetry #24

Deep River

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2003-01-17 12:26 PM

So walk me down, then,
to Deep River.

Lay me down
upon the shore.

Scrub dark sand
into my hair.

Give me mud
from river jugs.

I will wait
in sleep, for you.

I will wait,
so lay me down.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (01-17-2003 12:28 PM).]

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2003-01-17 12:46 PM

Painful and peaceful, at the same time.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-01-17 01:22 PM

beautiful Mike!

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2003-01-17 01:38 PM

This is outstanding. I can think of multiple things to say, but why muddy the waters, when this is crystal clear, except to say how glad I am to have read this.

Thank you, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2003-01-17 04:06 PM

Thank you.

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