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Cardinal Suite (one of seven)
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Cardinal Suite (one of seven) |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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Writing the Cardinal Sins. The sins against love, and so, against G-d Written as I know them.... A true son of Zolel He knows no sate No bite Goes uneaten No offering Is refused The table is set Then, set upon And, as he, himself Consumes He is, himself Consumed |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
wondering what inspired you to write of the seven cardinal sins...and enjoying the results.. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Well Ron, Just been reflecting. Trying to see if I had actually accomplished(?) all seven. Seems that I had...in one way or another. But feel that I am far from alone. Ed |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ed, I know for a fact you are not alone, and I like you having posted this. A little taste of my own bitter wine... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Been a long time since I thought of the Cardinal Sins, Wranx. Enjoyed the moral to this one. Cor |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
got me thinking too |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sigh. just wanted you to know I came back to read...and there is so much here to delve into...I am trying to shake the brain fuzz, as I WOKE up thinking about this, damn ye.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gee...now I'm going to be dwelling on this all day... Not a bad thing...oh no...quite a deep thought. Enjoyed, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Ed, you do make the reader think...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
"the table is set, then, set upon" is great. This is more than decoupage wranx, if you need any assurance.  "am a tourist not a terrorist, don't shoot, cause we are all on a journey to God" Michak [This message has been edited by winston (01-15-2003 10:11 AM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Well, this was an interesting read with my morning coffee. Like your explanation of its origin. On to the next... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Wasn't Zolel superman's father? lol Sorry couldn't resist, much like I can't resist writing replies that never do justice to what your writing inspires. keep warm and did you enjoy work? |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Too much of a good thing can make us greedy, and lose sight of all the goodness that surrounds us. (or so that is my take) Enjoyed wranx~ |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
I am becoming full... thank you. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Each word is parsed out, yet it makes a feast. Great, now I'm gonna be guilty of gluttony, too. |
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