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Here There Be Dragon
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Here There Be Dragon |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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I felt tremors and braced myself to be swallowed whole again But it was me shaking shaking Chained rage one by one the binds give way The tail first and then a wing soon soon the dragon released |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I hope you brought a fire extinguisher for when it breaths!! Short, but excellent. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aenimal I made a pet out of mine, I call him Randy. Enjoyed |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good gosh...you can see the emergence of the beast... well done! |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raph, very good descriptions. I liked it.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
**** Maybe this one needs a little interpretation. The dragon here is not a negative image here but a good one. In chinese astrological reckoning I am a dragon and it's time those characteristics that were once very evident, should be released again**** Thank you Magnus but the fires I think would be a good thing Seymour that is open to some interpretation not fit for this forum so i'll politely and smirkingly back away. lol Thanks for the reply Thanks you sunshine I'm glad i conveyed that sense of relase |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Oops you slipped in while i was typing thanks Ethel  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
good ,so you ate youre wheaties and youre gonna kick ass again, good, i like it |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) I think I know how it feels to dance in the dragon jaws, it can be ugly but for an entrance is also made an exit! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-15-2003 11:25 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
That's the plan Inked it's about time Thanks Noah! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You do go deep my friend. And I love it. So you're a dragon, huh? One of my very favorite bumper stickers: "Never meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup!" (somehow I can relate...wry smile) I should catch up on some sleep before I try to catch up on reading, huh?  HUGS YOU |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
As long as you're not that purple Barney! Puff...hmm, now there's a dragon to cuddle with, flames and all. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well you know me...having not had *clearing throat* any ...in awhile...my mind goes to the gutter... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Can you relate as a dragon or that you taste good with ketchup? Big Hugs K, always bring a smile.Personally btw way I prefer my meddlers done medium with a peppercorn sauce or butter brushed..mmmmmmmmm meddler's Naw Kacy I need something a little more intimidating for awhile, really get the fire going then I'll relax and Puff just doesn't cut it. Wow Dixie I just reread it and holy crap i see it, but then I'm in the same boat floating in said gutter. I think it was Plato who once said "I gots to get me some!" or perhaps that was my friend Frank, i forget they're both very poignant. lol [This message has been edited by Aenimal (01-16-2003 12:46 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, it came across as a very sexual poem to me...obviously was not intended to be that way, but hey, poetry can have two meanings, or even more! *praying that we both get some soon* |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
ok I'm ravin' over this one....reminds me of silk ties and feathers. smiles very strong for being so short, those are my favs, write on! Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I love when the dragon within breaks loose despite the havoc it wreaks. Let me tell you from one dragon to another, life burns - and don't it feel good. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Dixie one word...amen lol enchanting all my poems are short I rarely have the patience to write anything more than what needs to be said Kethry I'm poised to finally find that out, i've forgotten what's it's like |
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