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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-01-17 09:57 AM



One Dimension

Two different lives
In parallel worlds
Thrown askew by
A cosmic wave
Tumbling out of control
Crossing paths
In the same Galaxy
To become One Dimension



[This message has been edited by Amature2 (01-17-2003 10:13 AM).]

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-01-17 10:51 AM


Hummm...this is very deep..

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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2 posted 2003-01-17 03:00 PM





This reminds me of a book my daughter read many years ago about a pancake dimension, one we both loved, and I cannot think of the name of it.

Anyway, the melting of one....nice...

Pat

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3 posted 2003-01-17 03:04 PM


My reply didn't come up so I cannot edit it, I meant the melting of two into one.

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-01-18 05:11 AM


*stepping outside to look at sky*
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5 posted 2003-01-18 06:52 AM


Indeed - making contact can be exhilarating...
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