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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-01-10 07:13 AM

gathered shells
decorate the shore
their voices still sing,
as seasons begin,
too soon blending into
the background on shelves,
as others take the stage,

the voice within,
staying near, though
somewhat dimmed,
re-emerges now,
surrendering
to its womb in the seas,
the heart of its home,
for renewal and welcome
of its long ago song

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-10-2003 03:23 PM).]

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2003-01-10 08:33 AM

hollow with mouthfulls
ms ink you made a glass box
of azure sandsong in this

enjoyed it

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-01-10 08:37 AM

inkedgoddess
An insighyful write, enjoyed.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-01-10 08:41 AM

I love to listen to seashells. They sound so mysterious.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2003-01-10 09:24 AM

beautiful m'lady.

You took a favored theme of poets and managed to give it a treatment that made it new and fresh through your eyes.

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

5 posted 2003-01-10 02:33 PM

The song is always the same, its how we hear it thats different. I enjoyed what you wrote

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2003-01-10 02:51 PM

oh yes these voices...enjoyed your words a lot

Charisma

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2003-01-10 03:14 PM

some songs have a way of being eternal.

enjoyed

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2003-01-10 03:21 PM

now you've touched
an inner shell;
the song of sea
that dwells
within me

thanks for the inspirational read

christian
Member

since 2002-12-18

Posts 331

9 posted 2003-01-10 04:18 PM

i thought brooklyn girls were suppose to
be tough and rugged and unpoetic> :smirk:

break the trends, take down barriers
you did. this is awesome.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2003-01-10 04:20 PM

the awakening of a pisces

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2003-01-10 04:21 PM

enjoyed

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

12 posted 2003-01-10 04:25 PM

brooklyn girls kick ass, and kiss ass of brooklyn boys, who know how to really read them

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

13 posted 2003-01-10 08:23 PM

inkedgoddess - a story told, one written from the ink of a pen held by the goddess...

BC

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

14 posted 2003-01-18 05:15 AM

well how did I miss this one the first go round?

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

15 posted 2003-01-18 06:50 AM

The song of the sea - sings to me as well - Very nice...

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

16 posted 2003-01-18 07:42 AM

An endless circle
in the listening
of a shell

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