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...Running With no Ends Through The Air... |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Suddenly I saw my self in that place where I always dream to be.... There I saw the dark views inside me... And I played with the waves deeply... There I saw My only heart And I swam so Far to catch him Coz there I can see him always.... I start Running through the cure air near the water with no ends Coz I couldn’t find my heart.... I watched my mobile... I wanted to hear his voice to feel that he still there... And he called and I felt my heart throbs beating so fast... I watched the sea While I am hearing his voice and I smiled coz I watch him there again.... I start running so fast on the sands with no ends through the air.... ---------------------------- LOVE U |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Suddenly I saw my self in that place where I always dream to be.... Dreams need to come true more often.. the good ones at least!  I liked this, good write Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very nice imagery. It feels good when there are no ends to trip over. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Interesting, coz you sound free and know that which you are chasing.. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I enjoyed reading this. It has a peaceful sound....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
GG........ I am happy coz you like it... Thanx alot for reading mine..... Hugessssssss |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Midnitesun....... Yes you are right.... I am happy coz you feel this.... Thanx alot... Hugessssssss |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
regards2you...... Yes its very nice feeling..... Thanx alot for sharing... Hugessssss |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
garysgirl...... I am happy that you enjoy reading my simple words.... Thanx alot... Hugesssssss |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Such loving serenity fills your words, sweet friend, this ade me smile to see you walking on air and water and treading softly on loves smile! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Suddenly I saw my self in that place where I always dream to be.... i too found much identification with this. it's the ultimate feeling isnt it. i love it, to be in a situation you only thought possible in fairytale.. you read my mind, and wrote it down secretlife. i'm enjoying your happiness. much love to you, looking forward to another happy write. lots of love, gemma xxxxxx  learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Mistletoe Angel.......... Thanx alot dear... I really miss your (we love you so much).. Hugessssssssss |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
gemjop....... I am really happy to read your kinds words... You are really cute.... And I am happy that you like it... Hugessssss |
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Night Shadow Junior Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 41 |
So sweet words, I really started to fly there in ur words, and suddenly i found my self in ur speciall world. Great Secret life, and hope to see more. Sam!! |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Night Shadow... I am happy to see u here.. good to know that u went to my world... Thanx dear... HUgessssss |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice trip you took me on here! |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
I can't imagine the wonderous feelings you have being free, I was free too as I read this and I thank you for it! Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
passing shadows......... I am really glad that you liked my trip... Thanx alot for reading my simple words... Hugessssssssss |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
enchantingvamp......... You welcome.... U know you are right feeling free is the best thing in our moments.... and I was so free.... Nice to know that u felt free too while u r reading my words... This is really nice....  Thanx alot dear..... Hugessssssssss |
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