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secretlife
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Grean Earth ,,,

0 posted 2003-01-16 08:06 AM



Suddenly
I saw my self
in that place
where I always
dream to be....

There  
I saw the dark
views inside me...
And I played with
the waves deeply...

There I saw
My only heart
And I swam so
Far to catch him
Coz there I can
see him always....

I start Running
through the cure air
near the water
with no ends
Coz I couldn’t
find my heart....

I watched my
mobile...
I wanted to hear
his voice to feel
that he still there...

And he called
and I felt my heart
throbs beating so fast...

I watched the sea
While I am hearing
his voice and I smiled
coz I watch him there again....

I start running so fast
on the sands
with no ends
through the air....

----------------------------

LOVE U



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GG
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1 posted 2003-01-16 08:50 AM


Suddenly
I saw my self
in that place
where I always
dream to be....

Dreams need to come true more often..
the good ones at least!

I liked this, good write

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-01-16 10:24 AM


Very nice imagery. It feels good when there are no ends to trip over.
regards2you
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3 posted 2003-01-16 10:38 AM




Interesting, coz you sound free and know that which you are chasing..

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-01-16 12:25 PM


I enjoyed reading this. It has a peaceful sound....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

secretlife
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5 posted 2003-01-16 04:09 PM


GG........

I am happy coz you like it...

Thanx alot for reading mine.....


Hugessssssss


secretlife
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6 posted 2003-01-16 04:11 PM


Midnitesun.......

Yes you are right....

I am happy coz you feel this....


Thanx alot...

Hugessssssss


secretlife
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7 posted 2003-01-16 04:12 PM


regards2you......

Yes its very nice feeling.....

Thanx alot for sharing...

Hugessssss


secretlife
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Grean Earth ,,,
8 posted 2003-01-16 04:13 PM


garysgirl......

I am happy that you enjoy reading my simple
words....

Thanx alot...

Hugesssssss


Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2003-01-16 04:27 PM




(sigh) Such loving serenity fills your words, sweet friend, this ade me smile to see you walking on air and water and treading softly on loves smile! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

gemjop
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10 posted 2003-01-16 04:35 PM


Suddenly
I saw my self
in that place
where I always
dream to be....


i too found much identification with this.
it's the ultimate feeling isnt it. i love it, to be in a situation you only thought possible in fairytale.. you read my mind, and wrote it down secretlife. i'm enjoying your happiness. much love to you, looking forward to another happy write.
lots of love, gemma xxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

secretlife
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11 posted 2003-01-16 05:06 PM


Mistletoe Angel..........

Thanx alot dear...
I really miss your (we love you so much)..

Hugessssssssss


secretlife
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Grean Earth ,,,
12 posted 2003-01-16 05:09 PM


gemjop.......

I am really happy to read your kinds words...

You are really cute....

And I am happy that you like it...

Hugessssss


Night Shadow
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13 posted 2003-01-16 06:07 PM


So sweet words,
I really started to fly there in ur words, and suddenly i found my self in ur speciall world.
Great Secret life, and hope to see more.

Sam!!

secretlife
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14 posted 2003-01-16 06:20 PM


Night Shadow...

I am happy to see u here..

good to know that u went to my world...

Thanx dear...

HUgessssss


passing shadows
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displaced
15 posted 2003-01-17 04:23 AM


nice trip you took me on here!
enchantingvamp
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16 posted 2003-01-17 06:17 AM


I can't imagine the wonderous feelings you have being free, I was free too as I read this and I thank you for it!

Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell

secretlife
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17 posted 2003-01-17 01:11 PM


passing shadows.........

I am really glad that you liked my trip...

Thanx alot for reading my simple words...

Hugessssssssss


secretlife
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Grean Earth ,,,
18 posted 2003-01-17 01:14 PM


enchantingvamp.........

You welcome....

U know you are right feeling free is the best thing in our moments.... and I was so free....

Nice to know that u felt free too while u r reading my words...
This is really nice....

Thanx alot dear.....

Hugessssssssss


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