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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2003-01-09 11:32 PM



Forgiveness

forgiveness
with bitter spoon
is hard to swallow
and harder to pour

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-01-10 02:35 AM


agreed
WhiteRose
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2 posted 2003-01-16 10:20 PM


You said a lot with those few words.
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3 posted 2003-01-16 10:56 PM




(big hugggsssssss) So very true, and it can taste just like flouride in your mouth, which you can't swish from your mouth for a whole minute that seems like eternity! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2003-01-16 11:42 PM


I do wish I had an incantation, or whispered prayer, or even some faery dust to make it all better. But know, that I light another candle for YOU tonight.

(yeah yeah, I know, it's just a poem, but I'm lighting it anyway)






1slick_lady
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5 posted 2003-01-17 12:15 PM


thanks

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6 posted 2003-01-17 12:42 PM


very well said!

I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne

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7 posted 2003-01-17 12:52 PM


Yes..it is, but I believe it can happen.

Loving this..missing you.

~~I Love You~~

Nan
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8 posted 2003-01-17 09:19 AM


For it's likely not sincere.... Nice introspection here...
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9 posted 2003-01-17 10:07 AM


enjoyed
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10 posted 2003-01-17 10:18 AM


so true
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