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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Symbiosis Symbiosis of my mind Gives me sight where I am blind Opens up my door of soul Stirring wars surcease of goal. A lullaby of past in lend To bring this process into blend A mountains top with pure white snow A place I stood so long ago. A field of evergreen to glean A place where ends the stroke of preen The closing of the waves of wail A sea of calm that I can sail Do I speak with flailing tongue? Perhaps the wailing of the young Then silence me to say no more For I am lost upon this shore Or offer me a holding band A helping hand to understand |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now the term, "holding band" encompasses much, our Sy. Something grand in grains of sand...a treasure, and a  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Symbiosis - One of my favorite words - and you've done it proud here, dear Sy...  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggssssssss) Such a mutual dependence is all we need, but with all this independence and allies and axis', it can be such a dedependent place! (sad sigh) May we all seek to find love among one another and spread it around, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and lignht always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning read Sy! Much enjoyed love. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine You're the only thing keeping me warm down here.  Nan, Thank you dear. Noah, Thank you my friend. Nancy, Have a good one, hugs back. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, You have aged so youthfully And your pen, exquisitely Every song of yours echoes off a nearby hillside Lovely poem Liz |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ahhh, I am glad to be here to have tea with you this morning. I had to use my dictionary and re-read this several times. Wonderful piece and I enjoyed it. Hugs and smiles .... Most of us go to our grave |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Can't properly start my day without your poetry Seymour! Thankyou. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
A wonderful poetic blend you penned Seymour I truly enjoyed Hope |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, again, Mr. Seymour, Sir, for your beautiful words. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, A very sweet answer, thank you. NewEnglandlazurlu Hugs and smiles back. Chris, Can't start my day without your read. HopeS Thank you my dear. garysgirl Thank you for the read. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, A quote of you yesterday (?), to a reply on one of your poems: "sometimes a dud, sometimes a flood", well at the rate you are going with these wonderful poems, which honestly cause me to either shake my head or just plain smile, I am gonna have to get a boat! Enjoying all you are writing. Thank you so much, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, I enjoyed your reply. But it's true some times I gush and some times I flush. LOL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hand held out ... heart in hand ... meet me on your beaches of understand.  *winkiewinkie* It's over long before her fall from grace, she's never been this far from safe. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I understand... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, It's a date I'll bring the freight. You bring the tea and we'll see. WWRS passing shadows Thanks that means allot. |
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