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Eliza Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 58 |
Eliza A start, she made, in opening Volume VII, a start, she promised herself, a heart start, a healing beginning, then she cried. “Dry the tears,” inner voices decreed, so she dried, and sighed, and watched the snow fly by. No longer young, but not yet frail, her own devices sung her inner torment’s jail for truth was told and blush lost bold so many years ago still he married and still he carries those memories he doesn’t know. ~*~ Volume Seven shall hold more truths of the many roads she’s traveled, she’ll shed some tears, but show no fear as life and lives unravel she wonders now that perhaps somehow, she’ll walk, unscathed, in gravel. And she knows the blood will show as footsteps go on. The questions she will ask of self might be asked of any she hopes to win no heart but His though once hearts were ever many. ~*~ Eliza sends her love to you, the keeper of the key, her song she sings with rhyme at time when sung in poetry. No mistress she, but truth prevails as she hides behind her veils, to right some wrongs and stands, purloined, a piece of gold gone free. Volume Seven begins. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
And I for one await each subsequent volume. Welcome to PIP a great introduction |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssssss) Oh Eliza, just as Shakira sings, "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story!" and I am certain that from here on in grace will be with you and you will find many more editions of rejuvenation and joy written before your very eyes and it will be like a fairy-tale come true, God Bless You, this is a precious debut! Welcome to Passions, sweet Eliza, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Eliza Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 58 |
I thank you, Sirs. [This message has been edited by Eliza (01-15-2003 10:45 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Eliza..Welcome to Passions! What an wonderful entrance you have made! Please check your email for a special greeting! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eliza, This is a very good first post. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to seeing more of your poetry. I hope that you like it here at Passions In Poetry....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Eliza sends her love to you, the keeper of the key, her song she sings with rhyme at time when sung in poetry. No mistress she, but truth prevails as she hides behind her veils, to right some wrongs and stands, purloined, a piece of gold gone free. Well...I'm impressed. Welcome. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This was exquisite!! Your poem was such a lovely pouring out of emotions. I'm one to pick and choose my favorite verse but I found it impossible, they were all so good. Welcome Eliza~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Veils of sanctity... Eliza is surely safe behind them... Lovely words, Eliza..  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Welcome to Passions Eliza... I do believe I will be enjoying reading your lovely and meaningful writes... this moves me, deeply... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 WELCOME, ELIZA!You've danced the seven veils in the most poetic fashion. I loved this entrance and hope to see more dancing soon. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Eliza The veils of life, enjoyed. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Eliza, ~WELCOME TO PASSIONS~ This is wonderful. I enjoyed it a great deal. Well written and touching. I, too, look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for this, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Eliza - Welcome to Passions!! I thoroughly enjoyed your first post. Looking forward to reading more of your works. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Eliza Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 58 |
You are all so very kind. Thank you for the warm welcomes. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
What blush does hide behind the veil from words that speak of poet's life. What though might come from in a tale where poets write, through joy or strife. Welcome Elize, a very interesting first, enjoyed..and looking forward to it... |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Welcome!! Enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
Welcome to Pip! Great post! Looking forawrd to more. Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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