»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #24
»
Ashes Of Us
| Open Poetry #24 |
|
Ashes Of Us |
|
|
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
|
The confusion has settled in and the sadness has won, each breath taken is like a stab deeper in my heart. I thought the well had run dry but the tears still flow in steady stream. and I remember, we shared the same dream... The images are fading and the dreams have turned to dust... all that is left remaining are the ashes of what once was us........ I know that you can 'read' me |
||
| © Copyright 2003 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved | |||
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
from the ashes rose Phoenix... and you too will rise... hugs my friend...and a sincere hope the times get easier for you. |
||
garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh Donna, I'm sad that you are sad. I sincerely pray that things will be better for you soon, so that you can once again see your dreams.   "Love makes the world go around" |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahh Donna...this is just too sad. I do hope you are okay sweetie. ~Hugs & Luv, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
||
|
winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
Ms Spirit I had to read this one, even if it did hurt to read the ending - the scary prospect of being reduced to dust. "am a tourist not a terrorist, don't shoot, cause we are all on a journey to God" Michak |
||
|
enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
ooooohhhhh i love this, its the honesty of saying ok i'm bleeding, i hurt like hell but i have to share, i need someone to relate, personally i think that's the hardest topic to write about. fab, loved it, write on ! Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
||
|
Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
and I remember, we shared the same dream... Makes it even harder, I know. I really enjoyed the style of this Donna. |
||
|
RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Commit it to an urn sweet Lady to hold shifting remains in hopeless grasping is for love to yearn and life's not everlasting |
||
|
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - written with the touch of a gentle spirit... BC |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit Flowers for the brave and grave, well done. |
||
|
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Donna, this is so very heartbreaking, I hope this doesn't apply to you just as this pain is applying to me and is just fictional, I send angel hugs your way! (sad sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much, also know I haven't forgotten about our duet and I just have not been communicating with you because I feel too low to write upbeat right now but I have a note beside my Shakira concert tickets on my bulletin board to write with you when I feel rejuvenated, yay! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 Donna! What a tear-jerker! I'm sorry, I'm knowing what you're feeling...you are not alone at all. |
||
|
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
powerfully well done exposé of sadness, loss Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
||
|
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know I loved Richard's response - how true, and to waste time almost mourning is time wasted as each second is only felt once. What a loss, his! And as for you - well, you will indeed be stronger, wiser, and more beautiful from this lesson. Hugs dear lady - you are not alone in this as you can see. |
||
|
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Excellent! I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne |
||
|
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such a beautifully sad and excellent write. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
