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Angel In Barefeet
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Angel In Barefeet |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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Silken hair of darkened night cascades around an angel face eyes shimmered with life A smile that wet's the lips of one who thirsts for light as water Though she is little more than an image now Painted longingly of memory on a dream's canvas Though beyond reach beyond hope beyond reason My love remains always [This message has been edited by Aenimal (01-15-2003 08:19 PM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh, I love this and especially the ending. Just precious. Always and forever. So touching. Thanks for this, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You paint the canvas so well Raph~ Enjoyed the longing and the loverly and all that remains ever after. Pretty poem you wrote~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i hope she'll come for you, just keep her near if only inside for now longing, loving and all that |
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Eliza Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 58 |
A painting that hangs, where? Close? Yes. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) This is so beautifully sensitive, sweet friend, know deep down true love will always exist in your heart which no thief can infiltrate your gallery and take the masterpiece away! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks for the warmth Pat, I'm glad you were touched by it Thanks so much Blues Thanks for saying that M I gotta keep hope up that she or someone like her will Eliza very true very true, welcome again Thanks Noah good to see you again! [This message has been edited by Aenimal (01-15-2003 10:58 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ethereal...radiates enough warmth to feel, but it almost disappears as a tease when it comes near. A wispy, wistful write! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aenimal A fair statement, enjoyed. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
K you picked that up eh? Of course you did oh mirrored one. Thank you Seymour, glad you enjoyed it always nice to see you |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Love seems to have a way....of screwing with every emotion. Doesn't seem to have to abide by any rules...does it? YOu captured the twist & turns very well in this write. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I've never found the answer to a lost love, nor does the sense of loss easily diminish. Liked your write. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Creates it's rules as it goes along doesn't it Salty Thank you Kayjay many no this sting |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Though beyond reach beyond hope beyond reason My love remains always ahhhh yes Bello, my point exactly. Maree fate is not just |
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