Open Poetry #24 |
Brightest Star |
DarkShroud Junior Member
since 2002-09-25
Posts 15 |
Brightest Star I've watched the stars in the night. Just to see your face, you make me glow more than anything. You are the brightest star in the night. When I see you, you make me glow so bright. You are the brightest and best thing that has ever happened to me. There are so many stars in the night, but only one of you, and I will always love you and only you. . . . Avayon M. Thorp [This message has been edited by DarkShroud (01-14-2003 04:29 PM).] |
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Ada'doLisdo'ti Member
since 2002-12-10
Posts 123California |
Very sweet, enjoyed reading this. romantic |
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DarkShroud Junior Member
since 2002-09-25
Posts 15 |
I'm Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks DS May you laugh, but not too much; May you live with relish, And may you love with all you have! [This message has been edited by DarkShroud (01-14-2003 04:28 PM).] |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
This was too cute.....enjoyed. It also reminded me of that company that you can contact and have a star named after you. Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is pretty. I enjoy love poems about the stars..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is a precious love poem, sweet friend, I always cry imagining the stars in my dream loves eyes, I wish for Andromeda to always fill your sweethearts smile, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Avayon, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, very romantic |
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