Open Poetry #24 |
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meningitis New Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 1planet called earth |
you have opened my vein but there's no more blood you have sucked me dry left me with only half remembered love my mouth works vigorously yet no sound escapes me the past becomes naught but clouded fantasy |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
My true feelings? First thoughts: my god, I can identify with this...the thought of loving another person romantically is absolutely exhausting no? Sucked dry indeed... sigh... welcome to passions btw...nice to have you here.. K |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Jimbob, this is a sad but well-written debut, sweet friend, I wish for these vampires to be chased away from you and for true love to find its way back to you, this is powerful, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet JimBob, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet JimBob, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-13-2003 08:52 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I shall look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
meningitis Touche, enjoyed. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Enjoyed your first post!! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS I enjoyed your first post and hope to read more of you....... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx for sharing this. I think we have all felt similar feelings, not a lot of fun. Welcome to Passions.. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
An interesting read with an interesting name. May you some day find a willing donor. Thanks for sharing and welcome to PIP. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! good write very expressive and i can relate. Welcome to Passions! |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
Welcome to Passions! I very much enjoyed this 1st post, hoping many more follow. Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
Welcome to Big Brother's place meningitis! Hope there is more of where this piece came from? "am a tourist not a terrorist, don't shoot, cause we are all on a journey to God" Michak [This message has been edited by winston (01-14-2003 12:24 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What blood type are you? Welcome to Passions. Nice bytes. |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
An intriguing write.... either you are breathless enjoying or you are withering away. either way, the description is vivid. Sherry Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
welcome...enjoyed the read |
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