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A Grain Of Sand
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A Grain Of Sand |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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A Grain Of Sand I touched forever it was a grain of sand upon your chest and the beach that had become you was vast and a welcomed guest I looked as far as I could see where sky and water touched a melting of horizon tangled as the same in clutch suddenly I realized where before I could not understand forever is not so far away it’s in a grain of sand "It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly." |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Amazing Helen !! Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done... an interesting set of truths in forever being in something as small as a grain of sand...and as common as something we overlook... enjoyed |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
Clapping wildly! Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so true, Helen... Thanks.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Not always the big picture is it? Enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful...absolutely beautiful!! And oh so true Helen. Well said! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
nice play with words, how you brought everything in so closely together |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
had to stop by again..and enjoy this... all in a grain of sand... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I'd like to touch forever at least one more time in my life  M |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Helen~ Very well done. Thanks for sharing...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - just one grain... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Helen, this is lovely, sweet friend, this is so very true, if only I lived closer to the ocean is all! (sad sigh) This is as lucid as agate, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...I must say I like this one so much, much better than others on this topic, and it's one of the best of all yours Helen. |
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