Open Poetry #24 |
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Waiting For The Light To Change, Under A Waxing Moon |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
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"The Moon is moving away from Earth by more than an inch per year" -Discover Magazine February 2003 "Look for me by moonlight; Watch for me by moonlight; I'll come to thee by moonlight, though hell should bar the way." -Alfred Noyes 1880-1958 . . . This time of mourning, one half year, has passed, the Earth says go, Saturn's cautionary while Mars would stop a man who's sublunary and knows resisting Venus cannot last, that love is gravity, it's void is vast, he muses staying orbitless is scary, revolving purposeless, unplanetary, that life with love's a feast, without, a fast, a diet through whose murk one moves downcast. Ardor's origins are luminary, it's dark of solitude he ought be wary should time with light, it's love move to the past. "Nils Desperandum" Wells Family Motto |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"that love is gravity, it's void is vast" omg richard...your poetry makes my head spin...helen |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
While waiting for the light to change... I should perhaps not be looking at Neptune through rose-colored glasses. But then again, I don't believe Mercury is retrograde. ![]() Excellent write here poet sir. ~Winks & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Thank you ladies. I think it may be time to give love another opportunity. Earth green and where we stand sublunary Saturn yellow Mars red and warlike one would think precludes a kinder light The Moon forever a female symbol (as well is Venus) slips away and I surely get no younger. Hope [This message has been edited by RSWells (01-14-2003 02:27 PM).] |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
That's right, Richard, don't lose hope.....give love another chance... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
perhaps my friend it is time...and if not I am sure the journey will not eclipse the feeling of understanding no man is indeed an island. |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
enjoyed! Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
life with love's a feast, without, a fast, ****************************************** Exactly. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RSWells A Tango is a very sexy dance, enjoyed. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) Oh Richard, syzygy to me is one of the prettiest words in the English language that so many never take account to, the union of the sun, moon, and planet, and the whole tango they produce together, who said it only takes wo to tango? (big hugggsssssss) This is marvelous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Richard, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! I'll have to read this again...and again... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
All righty then - Give it up - Ya can't resist Venus forever... That's where women are from, after all... Smiling here, RSW... ![]() |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Why not? |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
"and the dish ran away with the spoon"???..try dancing on the moon Mr. Wells, the view is quite beautiful, as are these words.. "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Richard~ Smiling here with the others. ![]() This is beautifully done...I enjoyed the read. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Richard--I went looking for your poetry as I haven't seen you for some time. I hope all is well and you found love or it found you. |
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