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What Did I Do? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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You said that it wasn't me that it's inside of you, but won't you please tell just what did I do? Did I fail to show you my love or was it already written in the stars above? I won't try to hold you I will let you go... but what did I do? Please let me know..... I know that you can 'read' me |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Heart yearning for answers , I have been going through much the same I felt all the emotion Hope |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you know...in some ways it is like what children face and have to deal with when parents divorce...it is not their fault the parent called it quits, it is the fact that things inside us are sometimes undeniable and have to be dealt with no matter how perfect or kind or loving the other is... you can't blame yourself for someone else's decision. It may well not be something wrong with you...but something that inside him has to be answered and dealt with. Emptiness takes many forms..and we can hide as well as deny it...but until we learn who we are and what it is that makes us whole, we can not truly love another. perhaps...the emptiness just caught up with him... |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Donna, Capt. Ron said exactly what I was thinking. He said it much better than I could have, though.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dear lady, I can't see how anyone with as kind of a heart as yours, could do anything wrong. Enjoyed. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I have to ditto CPhat and although that does not help the pain - until we realize that we can't make ourselves happy by making others happy we will never have that answer. I feel the pain in this and I ache for you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Donna...it really isn't you. Somehow things change and people grow apart...that's why they say always be true to yourself. The pain in this write is quite deep. hugs to you, and an ear if you need it. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I thank you all and I agree with Capt Ron, but Sharon you are so right.....it doesn't help ease the pain.....  thank you all... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
luv you butterfly sister of heart, I am back on a more """Normal""" schedule if you need to talk.....I too ache from reading this.... Lauren~ I sing to life |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
Sometimes it's no one fault....hugs. Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Again, I relate. And yes, understanding what happened can help. You've captured the need well. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Donna...I know this feeling of wanting to know what I did wrong..or not enough of or whatever. My heart aches for you sweetie. Sending big hugs your way...Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
you seem to be in hot water... hope this cools someone off |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - with your smile, it couldn't have been you that did anything... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Donna, this broke my heart reading as I have the same thoughts to my lost Joanna, as if she never loved me and pretended all along and I think "When oh when will I get my share?" (sad sigh) I send angel hugs out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
One woman friend that I am romantically interested in but she not with me told me that we just don't click...sometimes its simple and sometimes its complex...James |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Perhaps it's not what you did or didn't do... but one of those inevitable happenstances that life seems to put in our paths... Keep writing, GS... It helps.. |
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