Open Poetry #24 |
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Just One More Drop.... |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise ![]() |
Just One More Drop….. ![]() gold sun rise ballad whispering in ripe vineyards sweet wine of daylight moon scatters my dreams for you I weep bitter tears as night conquers light In black hole darkness A drop of sun Like golden honey Pours along my arm. It warms me Momentarily, Alive in memories Of your gentle hand And your soft voice How often have I thought of you When life became darkness I would come to your vineyards My hiding place, Your open heart and soft warm rays Of light would comfort me With the amber of your soul. I heard that you are dying Death, vacant and deep darkness I sit here in mourning Love, the meteor of light…. Is there no protection ? Should I walk always Between dusty arid dawns And dappled dusks? I fear, I'd go quite insane From such dazzling light …. Poetry is: |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Cher, I do believe your free verse is doing quite well....goes very well with the pic you enclosed with it... |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Cheryl, very, very beautiful...... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Thanks Magnus...coming from you that is quite a compliment and I appreciate it. Ethel: thanks sweet lady...and huge hugs to you too. aloha and be warm, Cher Poetry is: |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
There is much to be said for light... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
beautifully done...different styles evolving into a resplendit piece, it warms, it cozies, it soothes Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
CSKpoet Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wouldn't that be a good kind of crazy though? |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Thanks to all! Yes a good kind of crazy... I am. I am glad it warm with a cozy as that was the muses intent I have had a hard hard time writing lately so I am appreciative that this did result in some sort of quality.... ![]() Thanks again to everyone for your encouraging words ![]() Cher |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this Cher...James |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
Aloha! "Love - the meteor of light" is a great line. "am a tourist not a terrorist, don't shoot, cause we are all on a journey to God" Michak |
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