Open Poetry #24 |
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In Every Moment |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments ![]() |
I see your face molded in cloud As I tilt my head upward (closer to you) I sense you in soft wisps of shadow As twilight curls around the day (embracing me) I hear you in the breath of night As your spirit lingers in star-glow (drifting near) I witness your art In every streak of rainbow (canvassing the sky) I believe love transcends time And reaches the Heavens (delivered to you) And so I know That you live on In every moment of now And forever. *Krista Knutson* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
like your style |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow... beautiful ![]() |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
very very beautiful and encouraging, enjoyed this very much! Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
isnt it nice when you see someone everywhere?lovely poem |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssssss) Oh Krista, this made me cry as I could almost hear my love whispering reading this though now she doesn't live in my heart anymore! (sad sigh) I wish for this joy to always fill your deserving heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krista, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... very nice indeed. The spiritual blends with the personal.... good stuff |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is just beautiful....... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all for reading and replying...I'm still using writing to deal with my emotions after the death of a close friend...her brother spoke at her funeral and said that she would always be an artist and he would see her paint every time he saw a rainbow...the idea for this poem spun from that beautiful speech. Once again, thank you all for your kindness. ![]() ![]() *Krista Knutson* |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Krista~ This is so beautiful. I'm glad to see you writing through this hard time. Big hugs to you, ![]() ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
This is a very touching tribute to Erin. Im glad that I had the opportunity to read it. Keith M. |
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