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Open Poetry #24

Sweetness In The Sound

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-21 06:16 AM

Sweetness In The Sound

you believe
in the idea
of love
not in
the reality
of it
the realism
of love
is the living
of it
the daily tuning
of strings
to where
one note
will resonate
to the truest
tone possible
it is
the struggle
in remembering
the cause
and there
is such
sweetness
in that
sound

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2003-01-21 07:27 AM

the realism
of love
is the living
of it
~~~~~~
Wow, I liked this alot.
so so very true.

Many times people say they love you
and expect the love in return ..and its given.
But they never live it out and show the true care.

Definitely like this!
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

2 posted 2003-01-21 07:37 AM

A wonderful write and perfectly tuned gal..

(Many years ago when I used to perform, and I 'd tune my guitar frequently during my performance, it never failed that some drunk would ask what song I was playing! I'd always tell them it was a Japanese love song called "Tu-ning"....

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2003-01-21 08:33 AM

very nicely done indeed...as usual..I am very impressed...and enjoyed

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