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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-01-13 06:28 PM

midnight claims the sky
and i wish i was the moon tonight,
bestowed in a halo of glittering starlight,
moving across the sparkling black sea
sleeping beneath me,
pouring between the ghostlike trees,
in a golden stream,
to warm the bittercold night,
a beacon of light on the deer's path
as they venture out past darkness,
watching over the hopeless romantics
that wait for slumber to embrace their emptiness,
to gather their hearts and wishes,
transform their tears and fears,and
return to them the faith and love,
that they surrender nightly in dreams,
for just one night,
to give freely,that which i seek,
without hesitation, fear, or doubt,
for the whole world below
to resonate in my love

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-13-2003 08:35 PM).]

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

1 posted 2003-01-13 06:33 PM

A very giving Moon, as well.

A pretty write Michele, of deer and trees and heart.

Ed

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-01-13 07:38 PM

Very lovely...much enjoyed.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2003-01-13 07:38 PM

beautiful

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2003-01-13 08:01 PM

inkedgoddess - love your poem.

p'ssssssst, meet you behind the moon, at midnight...

BC

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2003-01-13 08:01 PM

inkedgoddess - whoops, now I did that twice...

Well, how about 12:30 then??????

BC

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garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-01-13 08:08 PM

HaHa!! @ Bill....That was cute how he did that...

Michelle, this is really pretty. I'll probably say this again, but it's the best I think I've read of yours so far....

In fact, it's a

for sure

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2003-01-13 08:32 PM

thanks for the nice words,
bill, pssst.........bring some wine and chocolate with the roses, and its a date

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-13-2003 08:34 PM).]

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

8 posted 2003-01-13 08:33 PM

Michele,

This is lovely. Creative and gives a sense of serinity. Flows well, too.
I enjoyed this a great deal.

warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2003-01-13 08:57 PM

My my, you sure know how to paint the moon in all it's majesty and make it beam!

Beautiful poem good poetess~

angelfriend
Member

since 2003-01-11

Posts 52
Michigan USA

10 posted 2003-01-13 10:55 PM

OOOOH. LOved it. I would love to walk in that enchanted forest as well. Nice images.

"The only gift is a portion of thyself" - Ralph Waldo Emerson

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

11 posted 2003-01-14 12:32 PM

Oh, absolutely beautiful, giving words. This is a lovely piece, I especially liked the imagery of the moon warming the cold. Wonderful!

*Krista Knutson*

"If we have no peace, it is because we've forgotten that we belong to each other." ~Mother Teresa

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2003-01-14 12:52 PM

wow! I like this one of all you've written.

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

13 posted 2003-01-17 06:13 PM

Very sensitive and well written. I always enjoy looking into you heart and soul. I am sometimes surprised at what I find.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

14 posted 2003-01-17 10:15 PM

inkedgoddess - a'hhhhh moon goddess, you touch my heart with your moon words. My favorite, as you know. Me and the moon, my romantic inspirations at times...

BC

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

15 posted 2003-01-17 10:50 PM

thanks for the return visit over here, i have the moon on the mind too tonight as its full splendor sits at the window

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