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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Restless nights aching heart tears in eyes alone in fright drifting unto desolate shores remembering loving you... No more a spirit filled with joy now overwhelmed in sense of void bottomless spiraling down isolated lonely bound... While in the stillness of the night a chime of clock each hour would sound as she lay awake minutes tick away just as her dreams fade away... As winter's blanket frigid cold would wrap itself unto her soul draping her in crease of fold bittersweet forevermore... If only the truth be told deep down inside a yearn profound for that special touch one of a kind... *~coco*~  Inspiration-Heart Condition by PoetFriend Catalinamoon /pip/Forum76/HTML/001596.html |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Coco is back!!!!!!!!!  wooooo hooooo   |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh my gosh, this so deeply touched my heart, sweet friend, I too am suffering this bittersweet heartache right now and I know Sandra will find this special touch of love and all her dreams will come true soon in time as I hope you have found this happiness for your deserving heart! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this will so deeply touch her heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You have captured what is in that heart so well sweet lady. Is it ever good to see you back here and to read your wonderful poetry. The sadness and torment felt within these words came alive through your writing. ~ The soul lies buried in ink that does not flow ~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
While in the stillness of the night a chime of clock each hour would sound as she lay awake minutes tick away just as her dreams fade away... As winter's blanket frigid cold would wrap itself unto her soul draping her in crease of fold bittersweet forevermore... ======================= a melancholy masterpiece...a bittersweet beauty...haunting and angsty...my favorite kind and always with the perfect pic to accompany your words...well done poetess girlie...so good to read you again.  It's over long before her fall from grace, she's never been this far from safe. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, you must have been here before I came here, because I don't remember reading you before. It sounds like you have lots of friends here, so I hope you are back to stay? I really enjoyed reading this poem. It is beautiful. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh this touches me in so many ways....very lovely.... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Coco......soooooooo good to see you posting again....have missed your wonderful poetry. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Coco....You're back!! I love this!! You have been SO missed!! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's nice to see you back Coco. I've missed the romance and soft feel of your poetry. This was lovely and heartfelt. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent write Coco...and welcome back, haven't seen ya in ages.. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SweetSweetPoetFriends JanetMarie, MistletoeAngel, Mysteria, GarysGirl, Gentle Spirit, Charisma, Enchantress BluesSerenade... Heart hugs2each of you for your most kind replies... Missed ya bunches and bunches these past few months but the hectic pace has begun2settle down and so I look4ward to reading your poetry in the wee morning hours... smiles2uAlways... Pssssst... MAGNUS you snuck in there on me in midst of my reply so smiles2uMyPoetFriend as well... *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (01-13-2003 09:39 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
This was wonderful to read, I'm still going over pieces of it in my head.....looking forward to reading more....I'm learning so much from you guys here. Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hellooo good to see you back and read your wordsM |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
CocoBaci - nice to see you again my friend, and your writing... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
CocoBaci Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Coco, I really enjoyed this, and I, too, like Ethel,(Gary's Girl) haven't had the pleasure of reading you before, but I do look forward to reading more. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Thank you sooooo very much for letting me know SweetPoetFriends, that you have stopped by... HugsNsmiles2youAlways *~coco~* |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Restless nights aching heart tears in eyes alone in fright drifting unto desolate shores remembering loving you..." I read... you touch.... loved this part especially |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Coco,this is very touching. So much emotion. I guess you know how I feel. Thanks for being inspired by my poem Sandra |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SweetieSea, it's been a while but I want ya to know I've missed ya dearPoetFriend but for a bit I'll be hanging out on those backpages doing catchup... DearCat, ya know that poem of your's is in my library cuz there's something about it each time I read it that remain's with me so it is I that applaud you sweetie, for the inspiration from your heartfelt poem... TeddyBearHugs2uBoth... *~coco*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You, are one of a kind too. I enjoy the way you gently reach out and touch another poet's heart and soul. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
I haven't had the pleasure of reading you until now....and it was a very nice treat indeed. Such a lovely picture expressed with lovely words. I do remember your name from some where because I commented on how i liked it...maybe we talked in one of the lounges. ANYWAY..I still like it. *S* In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
MIDNITE, you are a true sweetheart and my heart hugs ya dearPoetFriend... SALTY, thank you for letting me know you popped in this thread and your kindness in reply has me smiling (nice2meetU poetfriend)... Hugs2uBoth... *~coco*~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
"One of a kind..." that could describe the poet also! Good to read you again, take care! I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Eagle1, thank you soooo bearyyyyyyyyy much for taking a peak at this post and for your sweeeet sweeeeet reply... Smiles2uDearPoetFriendEagle1... *~coco~* |
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