Bluffing.........Duet with Cpat Hair

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Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

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0 posted 2003-01-13 03:23 PM

Geesh,
why do I think back to then?
You didin't know me well,
It was late ,
and I wondered
what you thought
Of me.

I ran away like Cinderella
in need of
losing both time,
and my shoe,
not stopping to pick it up.

I couldn't stop,
to busy with the pleasures of giggling,
but ashamed
of thoughts that appeared
leaving me with damp dreams
illicit

Your cards
Unshown
still face down
yet eyes brimming sex appeal,
an unspoken invitation
I believed
The growing tensions
Between you and me

left me a fool,
thinking you wanted me
while I was longing
To discover everything
under shared blanket of love.

Your words
dealt another hand
and I lost my ante
as I put on poker faced laugh
saying the stakes
were too high.

[This message has been edited by Charisma (01-13-2003 03:30 PM).]

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

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1 posted 2003-01-13 03:27 PM

Thank you Ron, for the opportunity to write this one with you. it was a real pleasure to do, and I had a lot of fun.

((hugs))
Charisma

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-01-13 03:43 PM

I think the credit goes to you...all I really did ws edit what you wrote and add a word or two here and there..this one is truly your creation! I enjoyed!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-01-13 03:48 PM

a joy to read two of my favorite poets!

This was a sure bet--enjoyed the twists of metaphor here.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-01-13 04:19 PM

(sigh) Oh my gosh, you two wrote such a wonderful duet here, sweet friend, what a royal flush of poetic charisma here, yay, I love it, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Charisma and Ron, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2003-01-13 05:23 PM

Yes, you both used metaphors very well to
create neat little twists of the meaning
within. Nice job...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-01-13 07:42 PM

You two duet very well!!
So much enjoyed the read.
~Hugs & Smiles to you both, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2003-01-13 07:45 PM

enjoy your read

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-01-13 08:24 PM

Charisma and Capt. Ron,
I love this duet you two wrote. It's beautiful....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

9 posted 2003-01-14 01:31 AM

whoohoo! I love duets! Nice job, you two!

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

10 posted 2003-01-14 01:52 AM

nice job you two...helen

enchantingvamp
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since 2002-12-21

Posts 214
Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas!

11 posted 2003-01-14 05:28 AM

great piece guys!

Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

12 posted 2003-01-14 07:04 AM

Can only say what everyone else did.

Plus, great little slice of life, but we sure do have to know, first, if there is a Joker in the deck of life.

You two play partners well in the poetry writing game.

Enjoyed, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Charisma

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lost in blue pages

13 posted 2003-01-14 07:34 AM

Ron:

you gave me to much honour Ron, it is your hand that twists the finish touch.

Serenity: glad you enjoyed the twists too

Noah: always enjoying your enthousiasme and kind words. thank you for being such a good friend.

Magnus: thank you

Enchantress: glad to know that you enjoyed

vandana: thank you

garysgirl: glad you like this duet

passing shadows: thank you for your kind reply

1slick_lady: thank you

enchantingvamp: thank you for the great

regards2you: thank you, and there might be a joker, somewhere in the deck of life

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

14 posted 2003-01-14 08:49 AM

Thanks to all... Charisma does indeed deserve the credit here as the words and metaphors are hers... In this case I was editor not creator.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2003-01-14 08:54 AM

Charisma
Good thoughts, good write, good read.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

16 posted 2003-01-14 06:46 PM

Fantastic...James

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

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highways, & byways, for now

17 posted 2003-01-14 08:03 PM

Charisma - nice to see a duet, especially one by you, and Cpat...

BC

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

18 posted 2003-01-14 09:50 PM

Enjoyed much - good work, you two!

Cor

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